Hibo's Freshman Composition Journal

2005-11-09T11:49:00.000-08:00

Jn#30
Frist , before I reached to the question ,I choiced to find the definition of the word essay; while an eassy is a serie of paragraph or a serie of sentence. An essay is much longer than one pragraph. Now I want to response the question ,and my response will be like this.I can write an essay with following five steps.

Prewriting (clustering,making a list )
Preparing a scratch outline
Writing the first draft
Revising
Editing and proofreading

2005-11-09T11:20:00.000-08:00

Jn#29
The best commercial ,I have ever seen was a parfum commercial.First their is a woman walking in a flawor garden ,She decided to cut some flawor , in her third flawor she meet something surprising .She saw a water cominng ,after that the water got a size like a pool , and cover all over her body .Finally the woman transformed a bottle of parfum.

2005-10-31T11:08:00.000-08:00

Jn#28
One thing I hat using in the frist week is the computer, beacause doing the homework on the computer was hard for me and the taping ,but now I like using computer ,because I'm better than before.In general I hat using plane, because everythime I travel with ,I have an headache.

2005-10-31T10:47:00.000-08:00

Jn#27
The one piece of technologie ,I enjoy using is ;the telephone ,beacause I like to talk everday with my mother.In th other hand the telephone is the most important thing you can communicate to every where and can every one used alphabetic or analphabet person.

2005-10-31T09:35:00.000-08:00

Jn#26
If we are humain being every day we woke up, we meet something different the other day( bad or good thing) .because you saw some good peopl who strugling with a difuculte time .They wanted to do something but they can't that peopl think they are bad in my opinion they are not.In addition I don't like to juge by myself ,beacause I know what I can or can't I like to resolv this difficulte time the way I think is better for me or I say you will win, beacause before when I can't to do something I was angry but life isn't that way. You have to make happy yourself.I learned more thing.Finally I knew live was nothing anything can happen I like to have a open mind for everything in my life.

2005-10-29T00:08:00.000-07:00

Jn#25
Mostly I like to cook.While sometime I buy a cooking- books or I check in the internet to find some recipies .Because when you prepared your own dish you have lots a confortablity on your health.In the other hand when I saw some dirty restaurant investigated that time I decided do not even buyed a salad at any restaurant .In addition my prefer recipie was hindians, Middle eastern ,and Ethopiens dish.Finaly sometime I like to create my own dish and in the futur I like to learn more dish.

2005-10-25T01:22:00.000-07:00

Jn#24
If someone got in front of me in the line the movie,I would tell him please go back.Because they are some people who maked a mistake .If this person listen to me is okay ,but if he didn't , I don't liked to fight with him.A this time I know that person needed a bad thing ,I have to live him along ,and the better way is be patient , because I know I will watch the movie.

2005-10-21T01:51:00.000-07:00

Jn#23
If I ordered an ice -cream cone and forget to bring the money,after that I want to tell the accident and apologize to him .I want to ask him if I can return the ice -cream cone if he was so anger to hold my jewerly or asks the client to pay for my .If that couldn't works I want to call someone to bring me a money or if he let's me go for sure since I go home I want to bring the money and came back to pay the doubl price

2005-10-19T23:05:00.000-07:00

Jn#22
No I have ever been discriminated.But if could happen to me ,that day I will be so sad , and I will report the case to the justice . Because I don't likes to hurt or juge anyone in his race , religion or their body looks. My opinion was to give every body a respect and love.

2005-10-18T21:56:00.000-07:00

Jn#21
If I woke up in another country and none could uderstand me this question remember ,when I came to the united state. Because it's so hard and really hard the others understand you. Its like be a blind person the frist months the only you can survive ; is communicating with a signal or write the words .

2005-10-17T22:19:00.000-07:00

Jn#20
My spare time I mostly watch Ophra and Dr.Phil shows .They talks different topics on their shows .Yesterday, I was watching Dr.phil show .There was a debate betwen two women .Its was breast- feeding baby between those two women.Someone said the mother has the right to breast- feed her baby in public ,the other one was opposed in that opinion .For me the frist one was right.Because if the mother travels to somewhere or other state ,when she is in the public or in the airport she can breast-feed her baby .But she has to cover herself a blanket when she breast -feed her baby .The breast- feeding was the most important nutrient for the frist six months to the baby.finally I like the mother breast- feed her baby because is good to the baby health.

2005-10-16T00:51:00.000-07:00

Jn#19
If I saw little bugs in my salad ,frist I became so sad ,if this situation happen in a retaurant ,my second reaction will be to avoid the manager ,and show him the dirty salad .Because they dont care the health of their innocent clients.After Icame home I would to inform all my families and friends to be careful any dish of this restaurant.

2005-10-04T23:31:00.000-07:00

JN#18
If I could give any gift in the world I would give a long-time life and health to my mother because my mother protect my sisters and my grand mother.

2005-09-21T01:48:00.000-07:00

Jn#17
If an animals could talk to me exampl a camel frist I became so nerveous and then I like to asking him how he could talked how many language he can communicat with the person ,what he like or dislike .After that I want asking him how he can resist no drinking water a weeks or how he carried all this heavy staff or walking in the dessert.My lasts question how he ll be in this condition I ask him was his reaction be in this communication world and asking if we can be friends with me to protect him.

2005-09-21T00:44:00.000-07:00

Jn#16
If they are no television for one thing the population can't keep their eyes what s happen in their nation and around the world.The tv was good for example after the Katrina hit in New Orleans .A little girl separt by her father after she tell his description to the reporter a the time her father was watching the tv and saw his daugther.The reason the tv was bad for the chidren because they are some channel isn 't good for him or they miss their home works watching the tv

2005-09-21T00:01:00.000-07:00

The next summer I went to visite my mother and my sisters in Djibotui and then I ll go to ethopia visiting my grand -mother because I miss my familys so much .The are one reason I worry about is the flyt its could be take two days to go back home .But when I talk with my mother and my sister I felt I m with him.Sometime I asking by myself how you ll felt when you see your familys and your friends .While some of my friend we was together thirten year in the same class.I can wait to visite my schools I think it ll spend more months .

2005-09-20T01:53:00.000-07:00

Jn#14
If I could became invisible when ever I wanted ,frist I used this invisiblity when I needed something important like if I take an examen before his could be .I shoud go to the adminstration and stoled the question paper and the other hand I would get everything free because there is no one who juging .But now I m visble everyone is around me and I have to respect myself

2005-09-20T01:29:00.000-07:00

Jn#13
Something that really bugs me is when I decide to call my family .The reason was the phone card I bought didnt work or I have to repeat the number more time .Sometime I call to the customer to find an answer if I didnt.I canot be happy as a long I can communicate with my family

2005-09-16T13:26:00.000-07:00

Jn#12
If I probably fly all that often.I could fly with enjoy and liberty. I woud fly to see my family and visiting all my interst area that time I not worry about transport .I would use this ablity when de sun raise because I m scaring the heat.

2005-09-16T00:46:00.000-07:00

J#11
One of my favorite book was madame Bovary written in 1856 by Gustave Flaubert. who is a French realistic novel.The author was talking about his feeling by portraying the frustraction and love affair of a romantic young women married to a dull provincial doctor

2005-09-15T01:31:00.000-07:00

Jn#10
I want to talk about me .I came to the USA in 2003 after I graduated in high school. But my diploma was in french and I didnt speak any english.After one year I deceided to go to community college to take an information about which part I can study .That time I knew I need to fortify my english before takeen other class .So right now I want to study more english to change my live and I hope to do all I can.

2005-09-13T23:56:00.000-07:00

jn#9
the best advice that I have ever received was an idea came from to my father .He set behind me and told me there will be a good time and bad time in your live .He give more opinion I can resolv all this thing .I remenber his word when I saw .For me that was my best adivice

2005-09-13T23:02:00.000-07:00

jn#8
frist I m very intersing to listen the music my favorite songs was Somali and Ethopian music.I like when the singer talk his feeling or s' adress to the others .When I m working in the house because I feelt more energie .I like to sing, to play guitars and piano.

2005-09-13T19:46:00.000-07:00

jn#7the most indipensable possession in my live is my sister I cant forget her honesty and responsablity.Because she always encourage me to be educated if a have a problem she is only one i can tell her.Sometime I said she is the part of your live her possession in my live was so strong .she is indispensable of my live

2005-09-13T19:00:00.000-07:00

jn#6
they are so many difficulty i faced coming to school be different cultur the way I m dressing sometime I feelt all the the people was looking me . In the other hand my english isnt good I didnt understand the system to be honeysty my big problem was the frist week the teacher do their work in the computer me what i m waitting is the teacher announce the homework in th blakboard sometime I miss my homework because I didnt chekt my blakboard.But now I m getting ready for the system to complete my goal to be student.

2005-09-13T18:03:00.000-07:00

jn#5
something I noticed about myself today is that I m very responsable with my daughter at midnight I heard my daughter crying I wake-up to make ready her milk.Anytime she cry I knew she was hungry .I want my daugther feel love and I hope in the futur my daugher growth -up love and respect

2005-09-11T01:20:00.000-07:00

J#4: Courage
I noticed about myself today I m so courage to learn in the class .I like to listening the teacher .I like to do my hommework quikly .before I cant post my journal .But today I can .I m so happy to do my homework.

2005-09-11T00:56:00.000-07:00

J#3 : Bored
when I m bored I like to go out like to the mall or visiting my friends.Sometime I read religieous books , traditional poem and playing a cart game .I like to watch the movie.I took my daughter to the play -ground.I like to chat with my friends

2005-09-11T00:29:00.001-07:00

J#2: MY hero was Martin luhter king,Jr because his is a courageous man and exraordinary
who always wanted to give voice to the African- American people .His stared to create a nonviolent politic but every body liked his opinion and became a civil right.King won his mission
King was a rigth man ath rigth time .King was left a beautifull opinion can every body take a example and god bless him