Jn#30
Frist , before I reached to the question ,I choiced to find the definition of the word essay; while an eassy is a serie of paragraph or a serie of sentence. An essay is much longer than one pragraph. Now I want to response the question ,and my response will be like this.I can write an essay with following five steps.

1. Prewriting (clustering,making a list )
2. Preparing a scratch outline
3. Writing the first draft
4. Revising
5. Editing and proofreading

Jn#29
The best commercial ,I have ever seen was a parfum commercial.First their is a woman walking in a flawor garden ,She decided to cut some flawor , in her third flawor she meet something surprising .She saw a water cominng ,after that the water got a size like a pool , and cover all over her body .Finally the woman transformed a bottle of parfum.

Jn#28
One thing I hat using in the frist week is the computer, beacause doing the homework on the computer was hard for me and the taping ,but now I like using computer ,because I'm better than before.In general I hat using plane, because everythime I travel with ,I have an headache.

Jn#27
The one piece of technologie ,I enjoy using is ;the telephone ,beacause I like to talk everday with my mother.In th other hand the telephone is the most important thing you can communicate to every where and can every one used alphabetic or analphabet person.

Jn#26
If we are humain being every day we woke up, we meet something different the other day( bad or good thing) .because you saw some good peopl who strugling with a difuculte time .They wanted to do something but they can't that peopl think they are bad in my opinion they are not.In addition I don't like to juge by myself ,beacause I know what I can or can't I like to resolv this difficulte time the way I think is better for me or I say you will win, beacause before when I can't to do something I was angry but life isn't that way. You have to make happy yourself.I learned more thing.Finally I knew live was nothing anything can happen I like to have a open mind for everything in my life.

Jn#25
Mostly I like to cook.While sometime I buy a cooking- books or I check in the internet to find some recipies .Because when you prepared your own dish you have lots a confortablity on your health.In the other hand when I saw some dirty restaurant investigated that time I decided do not even buyed a salad at any restaurant .In addition my prefer recipie was hindians, Middle eastern ,and Ethopiens dish.Finaly sometime I like to create my own dish and in the futur I like to learn more dish.

Jn#24
If someone got in front of me in the line the movie,I would tell him please go back.Because they are some people who maked a mistake .If this person listen to me is okay ,but if he didn't , I don't liked to fight with him.A this time I know that person needed a bad thing ,I have to live him along ,and the better way is be patient , because I know I will watch the movie.

Jn#23
If I ordered an ice -cream cone and forget to bring the money,after that I want to tell the accident and apologize to him .I want to ask him if I can return the ice -cream cone if he was so anger to hold my jewerly or asks the client to pay for my .If that couldn't works I want to call someone to bring me a money or if he let's me go for sure since I go home I want to bring the money and came back to pay the doubl price

Jn#22
No I have ever been discriminated.But if could happen to me ,that day I will be so sad , and I will report the case to the justice . Because I don't likes to hurt or juge anyone in his race , religion or their body looks. My opinion was to give every body a respect and love.

Jn#21
If I woke up in another country and none could uderstand me this question remember ,when I came to the united state. Because it's so hard and really hard the others understand you. Its like be a blind person the frist months the only you can survive ; is communicating with a signal or write the words .